Homework: Art therapy for your pronunciation: writing a haiku

I find your kaihu very gentle and vivid; it's easy to imagine these shadows moving in the dark. I think there's a real play of light that stands out in these three lines, with the daylight and shadows following one another. The evocation of shadows and light reminds me of fleeting moments, which you manage to highlight at the end of your poem through the moments that pass and seem to almost escape us.