'Till the summer comes

'Till the summer comes

by Margot Willocq -
Number of replies: 4

My hand in your hand, 

On the golden sand I breathe, 

Your eyes like the sea.



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Re: 'Till the summer comes

by Ines Berkane -
I really liked your haiku, you paint some beautiful images. Your haiku was about summer, mine is about the end of fall.
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Re: 'Till the summer comes

by Ivan Fadeev -
Your haiku feels so warm and calm. It hits extra hard because I’m finally seeing the sea again after two years...