The Moon

The Moon

by Yiming He -
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People came and people left,

The moon stood still, without a word,

Only let out a sigh.

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Re: The Moon

by Marwa Belladjou -
What a beautiful haiku! representative of the quiet contrast between human transience and the moon’s timeless stillness...
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Re: The Moon

by Guoqing Zhang -
Your poem has such beautiful imagery! Bur just double-check the syllable count to make sure it fits the 5-7-5 format. Great job!