haiku

haiku

by Elizaveta Kostyleva -
Number of replies: 2

I waited for dawn,
City lights faded to gray,
New hope started here

In reply to Elizaveta Kostyleva

Re: haiku

by Varvara Sverchkova -
I liked your haiku; you respected the given rule about the use of syllables. Personally, I loved the phrase “City lights faded to grey” that paints the scene clearly. The ending is uplifting and fits the haiku feeling.