city haiku

city haiku

by Clotilde Bonda Tagne -
Number of replies: 1

Bright lights filled the streets

Cars rushed past tired faces 

Neon signs flickered

In reply to Clotilde Bonda Tagne

Re: city haiku

by Elisa Garat -
I really like how your haiku captures the energy of the city at night. The verbs “rushed” and “flickered” give it motion and life, making the scene feel vivid and immediate. The contrast between the busy streets and the flickering neon adds a nice touch of atmosphere.