My haïku

My haïku

by Zara Yilmaz -
Number of replies: 1

Moonlight kissed the lake

Dragons soared above the clouds

Stars guided my path


In reply to Zara Yilmaz

Re: My haïku

by Laetitia Bekhti -
I love your haiku! The past tense verb kissed fits perfectly and the images of the moonlight, dragons, and stars create a peaceful mood smile