You followed me there,
Hearts and stars aligned at last.
Welcome home, brother.
Love the theme you chose for your haiku!
So beautiful ! The "hearts and stars aligned" line perfectly captures that magic moment of reuniting !
I really like the warmth of this haiku. The image of hearts and stars aligning feels very sincere, and the last line is especially moving. It gives the poem a strong emotional landing and a sense of belonging
It's beautiful, I think Homer would have appreciated your take on Castor and Pollux.