ocean

ocean

by Lou Khamdamov -
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The ocean breathed slow
Waves touched the quiet shoreline
The day ended soft

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by Mathilde Verot -
Your haiku truly reflects the gentleness of a summer evening; it evokes a certain nostalgia. I truly like it!
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by Yiming He -
I really like your poem, it is beautifully written! It reminds me of certain melancholic movie scenes.